And things only get worse ...

27th Jul 2020, 7:05 AM in Chapter 44. Descending to hell
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And things only get worse ...
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Valares 27th Jul 2020, 7:05 AM edit delete
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Comments:

Valares 13th Jul 2020, 5:57 PM edit delete reply
Valares
A undead dragon! Magic beings like Dragons are rarely seen, and now our heroines are faced with one! One of the worst!
ShinigamiMaxwell 27th Jul 2020, 8:44 AM edit delete reply
ShinigamiMaxwell
Oh no..not good!
Valares 27th Jul 2020, 2:18 PM edit delete reply
Valares
What would be worse?
ShoShone 28th Jul 2020, 2:25 AM edit delete reply
ShoShone
Yeccchhh. Zombies are disgusting. They are not interesting. They're not entertaining. They just disgust me.


Last frame. "Yes! He is an Undead Dragon!"

When using the article "a" it must not immediately be followed by a vowel. Rather, use "an" when a vowel is to follow immediately. For the article a vowel follows a consonant and a consonant follows a vowel.

"And is on our way!" is fine. But another option is "And is in our way!" The nuance is slightly different with emphasis on it being an obstacle or impedance. But whether or not the emphasis is wanted is a matter of style. The prior way gives a slight nuance of understatement and lets the situation provide the emphasis. Or it presumes "Undead Dragon" to provide all due emphasis.




Frame six. "Help me find it, Melu." ~~OR~~ "Help me to find it, Melu."

The comma must be there as a pause or separator to indicate she is being addressed and is not the topic of discussion.
Valares 28th Jul 2020, 8:31 AM edit delete reply
Valares
Great explanation! I didn't know these details. Thank you for your help!
ShoShone 29th Jul 2020, 9:46 PM edit delete reply
ShoShone
NP


And zombies are disgusting.




BTW, how did you start learning English and what steps have you taken since then? What instruction have you had? When did you start?
Valares 30th Jul 2020, 10:46 AM edit delete reply
Valares
English course, but I finished a long time ago and I don't practice much beyond this hobby.